I came across this unique blog recently. There, you are invited to write anything in six sentences. There is a huge collection of six-sentence pieces of which many are excellent. Your humble servant here took a shot at writing one too, and it has just been published. Do go there and take a look, and perhaps, you could give me your comments on my not-so-clever piece.
six sentences
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I’ve left a comment, CS.
You should have more confidence in yourself.
I liked it very much.
Thanks for the encouraging comment, Susan!