i need paradise

the tang of kiwi
dominated my senses
as i traipsed
the avenue of tenses

i imbibed the vodka
the angels proffered
as they tongued
proverbs in vonlenska

a fire licked me
like a luscious tsunami
with a chill peppermint
and a vogue hint

lionise my clobbered soul, lord
patronise me with your clouting chord.

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  1. This is a really clever poem, cs.
    I especially liked the sharp contrast of vodka against angels and the strong images conveyed from it.

  2. Joydian the musician has disappeared for months…

    And I am back!

    Take care my friend.

  3. Fantastically clever poem, CS. Love the constrasting juxtapositioning of ideas!
    Brilliant!

  4. Joydian, where have you been to? catch up soon, will ya? 😉

    Suzan and Vanilla, thank you so much for the warm words of encouragement! 🙂

  5. Wonderful poetry for the senses. Thank you for sharing.


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