Changing Course

The Omega marks the Alpha
Sealing with the epilogue
That evokes the bravura
Of trials and tribulations
Of blessings and edifications

Time the commander
Takes charge of his prospect
Diverting route of progress
With ambitious navigation
That leads to the Promised Land

Published in: on Friday, September 28, 2007 at 12:21 am  Comments (6)  

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  1. Of course, just to be tricksy I would say the Alpha is the Omega and time is like lumpy custard…

    Nice words, CS – really good!

  2. thank you, Vanilla! perspectives often amaze me. 🙂

  3. I very much like its rhythm, CS. “Time the commander” – yes, a harsh commander…
    Good one!

  4. could never really match Time, could we? thanks, Vesper! 🙂

  5. I like how this poem seems to encompass such big themes: life, death, past, present, our orgins, our future. Amazing to put so much into one poem.

  6. thank you, Sara, for giving me your insightful thoughts about this poem! 🙂 yes, big things were on my mind when i penned this.

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