Quenched

The throat

Parched under heat
Flaking in layers
Rough gradient
Sore loser

Chilly fever
Smooth slope
Luscious in bite
Lemonade drip by drip

Soothed
Ice age throttled

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Published in: on Wednesday, September 19, 2007 at 11:32 pm  Comments (8)  
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  1. Ouch. I relate completely. I could do with something right now to soothe my sore throat!

    Be better soon.

  2. Oh, I can feel it, CS. Hang in there…

  3. CS, I you’re in the mood for a small challenge, there’s one for you on my blog.

  4. Sorry, I meant “if” not “I”…

  5. And then there is that lump like a trapped peach pit that makes me know I am feeling emotions.

  6. thanks Vesper and Colleen!

  7. That’s rather good.

  8. thank you, Bill! it’s encouraging to see you visiting! 🙂


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