what do you see?

what do you see?

here’s my take:

a life bedazzled,
wasted away
on the point
of aimlessness.

how about:

an abyss
for the sick and lost
with a 20-point
directional scale

folks, have a go, will ya?

what a contribution from this tag team:

Circle of life
wheels within wheels
on target
bull’s eye

Shot fired
life arrested
a static goal
why?

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  1. CS,
    I liked the entire piece but the last line. I felt that the last line intruded into the classy style of the piece.
    But overall, classy it certainly is. 🙂

  2. thank you for your pointers, Susan! i really appreciate them. 🙂

  3. Circle of life
    wheels within wheels
    on target
    bull’s eye

    Shot fired
    life arrested
    a static goal
    why?

  4. absolute brilliance here, Absolute Vanilla (& Your Highness)! i am very much relieved that Atyllah seems physcially present here in our pathetic planet. Mankind could still be saved! This tag team looks set to explode for all to see! I am looking forward to it. Be warned, rest of the world!

  5. thanks mr tan .
    but what do you mean by doing well ?
    as in studies or … ?
    anyway THANKS for tagging =D

    takecare !


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