red

red

he stood there

looking aggressive

his anger crystal clear

almost embarrassing

the evil of love

had left him humiliated

the rising impatience

threatened more hostilities

i had to
take an offensive stance
i had to
counter with violence
    i had to
    i had to
i had
      i
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  1. And then you come back with this. Fantastic work CS. Love the shape of it too. Very clever.

  2. aww, thanks V for the kind comments! me took quite a while just to come out with these few words. hope it’ll get better the next few days.

  3. Ohhh, so you’re seeing red! Very strong, CS! Great poem.

  4. Beautiful as always, CS
    Take care.

  5. thank you Vesper and Suzan! 🙂


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