the girl at the window

mum,
who’s that girl
at the window?
i don’t like the way
she looks at me.
i’m trying hard
to concentrate here.
am I doing
something wrong here?
please, mum,
tell her to go away.
the girl at the window,
she’s scaring
the wits out of me.

son,
who’s that girl
at the window?
i don’t like the way
she looks at you either.
concentrate and
don’t be bothered yet.
no, you are not doing
something wrong here.
please, son,
chew up the man’s brain now.
the girl at the window,
we’re going
to finish her up after this.

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  1. Eeeek! Now this is scary!

  2. i’ll take that as a compliment, thanks! 🙂

  3. Eye contact can be a bad thing.

  4. well said and observed, Jason.

  5. It was meant as such ( :

  6. I suspect this piece will work better as prose, CS. Try and see. It will be powerful & intriguing.

  7. i’ll see to it, Susan! thanks for the suggestion! 😉


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