Redlight

Wednesday, March 5, 2008

I had the curious urge,
But all I could do was to scratch it.

The consciousness oozed from the wound.

If the pain was existent, it should be spelt r-a-i-n,
Because it pelted upwards.

That left me home and pried.

3 Responses to “Redlight”

  1. NONI Says:

    good one….feelings transmitted to reader…..
    simple but powerfull

  2. Mariposa Says:

    beautiful!

  3. Vesper Says:

    I like this one! Good rhythm and images.

Leave a Reply