Quenched

Wednesday, September 19, 2007

The throat

Parched under heat
Flaking in layers
Rough gradient
Sore loser

Chilly fever
Smooth slope
Luscious in bite
Lemonade drip by drip

Soothed
Ice age throttled

8 Responses to “Quenched”

  1. Absolute Vanilla... (& Atyllah) Says:

    Ouch. I relate completely. I could do with something right now to soothe my sore throat!

    Be better soon.

  2. Vesper Says:

    Oh, I can feel it, CS. Hang in there…

  3. Vesper Says:

    CS, I you’re in the mood for a small challenge, there’s one for you on my blog.

  4. Vesper Says:

    Sorry, I meant “if” not “I”…

  5. colleen Says:

    And then there is that lump like a trapped peach pit that makes me know I am feeling emotions.

  6. Canterbury Soul Says:

    thanks Vesper and Colleen!

  7. Bill Liversidge Says:

    That’s rather good.

  8. Canterbury Soul Says:

    thank you, Bill! it’s encouraging to see you visiting! :)

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