Two Minds
Tuesday, August 21, 2007

I seek seclusion
In the middle of all these
Hurly-burly verve
Yet hanker for succour
Amid the hubbub that broke
Out from the nameless
Call for desperate
Measures could not have arrived
More timely than now
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I seek seclusion
In the middle of all these
Hurly-burly verve
Yet hanker for succour
Amid the hubbub that broke
Out from the nameless
Call for desperate
Measures could not have arrived
More timely than now
Tuesday, August 21, 2007 at 7:01 pm
I LOVE the colour in that photo, CS - nicely depicts the hurly burly from which we all seek seclusion.
Tuesday, August 21, 2007 at 10:43 pm
thanks, Vanilla!
Wednesday, August 22, 2007 at 12:29 pm
I really really like this poem, CS.
It’s a clever piece.
Wednesday, August 22, 2007 at 1:51 pm
thank you, Suzan! welcome back!
Thursday, February 21, 2008 at 1:40 pm
i feel along the same lines as you do..
i can sense you want to get away from things just the way i do
Thursday, February 21, 2008 at 11:33 pm
that was then…in my old situation…
now i’m out of that and i’m ‘free’…