red

Saturday, June 30, 2007

red

he stood there

looking aggressive

his anger crystal clear

almost embarrassing

the evil of love

had left him humiliated

the rising impatience

threatened more hostilities

i had to
take an offensive stance
i had to
counter with violence
    i had to
    i had to
i had
      i

5 Responses to “red”

  1. Verilion Says:

    And then you come back with this. Fantastic work CS. Love the shape of it too. Very clever.

  2. Canterbury Soul Says:

    aww, thanks V for the kind comments! me took quite a while just to come out with these few words. hope it’ll get better the next few days.

  3. Vesper Says:

    Ohhh, so you’re seeing red! Very strong, CS! Great poem.

  4. Suzan Abrams Says:

    Beautiful as always, CS
    Take care.

  5. Canterbury Soul Says:

    thank you Vesper and Suzan! :)

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