red
Saturday, June 30, 2007

he stood there
looking aggressive
his anger crystal clearalmost embarrassingthe evil of love
had left him humiliatedthe rising impatience
threatened more hostilities
i had totake an offensive stancei had tocounter with violence
i had to
i had toi had
i







Saturday, June 30, 2007 at 5:18 pm
And then you come back with this. Fantastic work CS. Love the shape of it too. Very clever.
Saturday, June 30, 2007 at 11:29 pm
aww, thanks V for the kind comments! me took quite a while just to come out with these few words. hope it’ll get better the next few days.
Monday, July 2, 2007 at 4:14 am
Ohhh, so you’re seeing red! Very strong, CS! Great poem.
Monday, July 2, 2007 at 1:55 pm
Beautiful as always, CS
Take care.
Monday, July 2, 2007 at 9:36 pm
thank you Vesper and Suzan!